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The National Assessment
Governing Board (NAGB) has defined three performance levels for the
National Assessment of Educational Progress (NAEP): Basic,
Proficient, and Advanced. Students not achieving
the NAEP Basic level are reported as Below Basic. The
Idaho State Board of Education has defined four performance levels
for results from the statewide assessment system: Below Basic,
Basic, Proficient, and Advanced. While the same terms are used by
NAGB and the Idaho State Board of Education, the terms have not been
defined to describe the same performance expectations. In reference
to reading achievement, NAEP Basic and Idaho Proficient for
writing are
somewhat similar, as indicated in the table below.
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Basic
This level denotes partial mastery
of prerequisite knowledge and skills that are fundamental for proficient
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PROFICIENT: Meets
Standards
The student demonstrates mastery of knowledge and skills that allow them
to function independently on all major concepts and skills related to
their educational level. The student demonstrates a comprehensive
understanding of all information relevant to the topic, at level. The
student can perform skills or processes independently without any
significant errors.
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The achievement
levels are for first drafts, not final or polished students
writing, that are generated within the limited time constraints of a
large-scale assessment environment.
Basic:
Fourth-grade students performing at the Basic level should
be able to:
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Demonstrate appropriate response to
the task in form, content and language.
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Use some supporting details.
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Demonstrate organization appropriate
to the task.
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Demonstrate sufficient command of
spelling, grammar, punctuation, and capitalization to communicate to the
reader.
Basic:
Eighth-grade students performing at the Basic level should
be able to:
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Demonstrate
appropriate response to the task in form, content, and language.
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Maintain a
consistent focus.
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Respond
appropriately to the task.
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Demonstrate
organization appropriate to the task.
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Use supporting
details.
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Demonstrate
sufficient command of spelling, grammar, punctuation, and capitalization
to communicate to the reader.
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Proficient: The paper demonstrates
the student's ability to use and understand the basic concepts of writing.
Clear, organized, and easy to understand, a paper is frequently formulaic
in its development. The writer has control of the conventions of written
language at grade level. The student's writing for that particular day and
prompt is at grade level. A
proficient paper for 8th grade students will have MOST of the traits listed below:
Audience/Purpose/Content/Organization
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Topic sentences with supporting details
and examples rather than a list
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Multiple, obvious paragraphs with
continuity between them
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Logical development throughout essay
without stray sentences or paragraphs; every part adds to whole
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Intentional transitions to connect
sentences and paragraphs
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Definite sense of audience awareness;
anticipates and addresses reader s questions
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May demonstrate higher-level thinking
skills
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Effective introduction (expressed or
implied); may be mechanical
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Evident conclusion
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Evident purpose
Tone/Mood/Voice/Style
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Appropriate language for audience
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Interesting vocabulary which is
appropriate to style
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Consistent point of view, verb tense,
and voice
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Writes with ease and confidence; uses a
natural voice
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Demonstrates risk: humor or
enlightenment, shows rather than tells
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Personal connections, dialogue, or
figurative language
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Varied sentences
Mechancis/Usage/Sentence Structure
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Mechanically correct
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Few surface errors; capitalization,
punctuation, and/or spelling errors do not detract from meaning or
readability
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Command of standard written English
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Varied sentence types and structures
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